Slave of the Victor- Bl, fantasy Chapter 18



Day by day passed by peacefully and delightfully but one morning in the court, the Emperor command Prince Renius to go the North Pra Border as the Prince of Mar has invaded the border, and he causes people in the North Pra Border to live in fear. The King ordered him to kill that prince of Mar. Prince Renius obeys and takes his decree, when the court has comes to an end, the king invite his nephew to have a drink with him and to discuss politics and military plans with him, after he finishes he set homes as he soon will have to go to North Pra border when the preparation was done.

The end of spring and beginning of summer is a time loved by many. The sun is not scorching yet warm, the tree leaves suffused with a tender green Nux/Sa was captivated with the sound of slender bamboo dispersing with the gentle lake wind and the softly swaying lilies and lotuses floating elegantly upon the lake surfaces. The flower petals will flutter and fly in the air, filling the entire garden with its sweet fragrance. Crowds of birds gather, truly like a wonderland. Prince Renius the general stared wide-eyed and dumbfounded at the indescribably romantic grace of Nux figure his deep blue robe undulating against the breeze, his long silky styled hair partly loose and unfastened waterfall down to his angle billowing in the wind it was a sort of careless magnificence beyond the capability of words as if his entire person held on an aura that descended from the heavens above.

He walks slowly and softly to cover Nux’s eyes with his left hand and hold his waist with his other hand into his embrace, but he had long since accustomed himself to being treated this way he was no surprise

Seemingly satisfied, he turned around and with a subtle smile, “you’re back… I thought you forget me, you just left without a word ” and he continues after deeply pondering “I don’t trust human”

Prince Renius’s gazed still failed to leave that stunning face, his voice was a bit of shaky  as he spoke “I was busy with military works, I can’t forget my duty, I need to protect you, and so I should balance everything” he takes his hand and caresses it, gazing into his two poignant eyes as if hypnotize

Nux face was letting out a happy smiling face and tentatively glancing at him, he can’t help asking him if he was going to battle with the Prince of Mar, the general nodded his head, Nux whisper to his ears, “I want to eat the Prince of Mar’s soul”

to be continued…

Good evening guys!

My uploading time is so messed up but I really wanted to finish this chapter 🙂

I hope you enjoyed it 🙂


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18 thoughts on “Slave of the Victor- Bl, fantasy Chapter 18

  1. I actually liked it very much, it was a nice read but at chapter 18….. I like the theme and how you write and since I´m starting taking it seriously writing my first novel( I´m a very novice writer) if you don’t mind I´ll do my ¨cool stalker moves¨once in a while and steal some of your style…. just learning, even if I don’t have time to read from chapter one.
    Nice meeting-reading you.

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      1. According to Dr. Wikipedia, Pnar is a Austriatic language spoken in Indian and Bangladesh. Interesting.
        I thought your writing was well written plus if you don´t have a lot of grammatical errors people tend to not notice or not give it any importance if they like the overall story.

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  2. Aww… so lovey dovey with his honey they’re sweet together but bad news I can’t help wondering something bad to happen in the war *biting fingernail* I can sense its coming bad omen
    Thanks a bunch for your hard nice work 웃❤유

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